how can i make my paper about the movie pearl  harbor better?
The attacks on Pearl Harbor were an  American tragedy that most would never have predicted.  December 7th,  1941 is a day that most people will not forget. Pearl Harbor was a  tragedy that brought about America's involvement in World War II .  Many  books and movies have been made in hopes that people will know the  truth of what really happened on that Sunday morning.  However, there  are far more historical inaccuracies than real life facts.  The movie  Pearl Harbor directed by Michael Bay is no exception.  There are far  more lies and fabrications than actual truths.  This movie was certainly  made for entertainment only and not to be served as a historical  reference.  During the 1940’s the great depression in America had just ended.  American’s were learning to be cautious; however at the same time,  they were optimistic for the future.   December 7th, 1941 is a day that  Teddy Roosevelt stated  "is a date that will live in infamy".  Pearl  Harbor is on the island of Oahu, Hawaii.  It is used as a naval base and  is also the headquarters of the U.S. Pacific Fleet.  The attack of  Pearl Harbor was supposed to be a preventative action to keep the U.S.  Pacific Fleet from influencing the war.  Early morning December 7th,  1941 the first attack began.  Almost 200 planes made up of dive bombers,  fighter planes, torpedo bombers, and heavy bombers were sent to attack  Pearl Harbor by the Japanese Navy.  The second wave consisted of 171  planes.  "The Navy and Marine Corps suffered a total of 2,896 casualties  of which 2,117 were deaths and 779 were wounded.  The army lost 228 and  113 were seriously wounded.  At least 57 civilians were killed in the  process."  The Japanese lost 55 airmen, nine crewmen on their midget  submarines and an unknown number on their large submarines.  The  Japanese carrier task force sailed away undetected.  All of this  happened in two hours and twenty minutes. Just four days later on  December 11th 1941, Italy and Germany declared war on the United States.   The movie Pearl Harbor directed by Michael Bay, has won an Oscar,  received 10 other awards and 14 nominations.  However, it has also been  on lists such as "Most historically inaccurate movies of all time."   Many people have said that there isn’t even a slight resemblance  between the movie and the actual attack on Pearl Harbor.  Historians  label Pearl Harbor as a joke. The movie Pearl Harbor was released on May  25, 2001.  It has an all-star cast of Ben Affleck, Josh Hartnett, Kate  Beckinsale, Cuba Gooding Jr., JonVoight, Alec Baldwin and Tom Sizemore.   Ben Affleck plays Rafe McCkawley who is based on a real fighter pilot  by the name of Joe Foss who had 32 confirmed kills.  Many things that  Rafe McCkawley says in this movie is a direct quote from Joe Foss.  The  movie is more of a romance than anything else.  The movie begins with  two young boys, Rage and Danny. They are pretending to be pilots when  they actually make their plane start to fly.  Danny’s dad comes  outside and is really angry and starts to hit Danny.  Rafe protects  Danny and continues to do that throughout the rest of their friendship.  Years later Rafe and his best friend Danny both fall in love with the  same nurse named Evelyn. When Evelyn believes that Rafe is dead, she  starts a relationship with Danny. When Rafe turns out to be alive and he  finds out about his love’s new relationship, him and Danny are now  enemies.  However, when the Japanese attack Pearl Harbor they are forced  to fight together again and put their differences aside so they can  fight to protect their country. In the end, Danny dies soon after he  finds out that he is fathering Evelyn’s baby.  With so much emphasis  on the love story in this movie, the writers must not have spent as much  time on researching historical facts because there are many noticeable  mistakes that make you wonder what the writers were actually thinking  about when writing a movie about Pearl Harbor. There are many historical inaccuracies in Pearl Harbor.  There are  several goofs that simply have to do with the year something took place.   In one scene in the beginning of the movie you can clearly see a car  license plate that says 1943.  Also, in the beginning of the movie there  is a newsreel from 1940 showing the US fighting in Cologne.  This  however, did not happen until 1945. One mistake that is really  noticeable is right after Evelyn tells Rafe that she is pregnant, the  camera zooms out and you can see a microphone in the top right corner.   During the attack, it shows the Japanese bombing the hospitals when  actually that did not happen.  It would have been a waste of Japanese  resources for them to bomb the hospitals.  Any damage that may have been  done to the American Hospitals, were caused by American aircraft shells  falling on them.  At one point, Franklin D. Roosevelt stands up from  his wheelchair which doesn’t seemed to be based on any truth.  It was  added for dramatic effect. It seems that the writers and creators of  this movie didn’t do the it's comparing the movie to the actual event. 
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your paper is muddled.  you need to more clealry define the  differences between the movie and the actual event.  write one paragraph  on the movie and then use facts to show the differences in the next  paragraph.  your grammatical errors on the other hand, are too many to  even mention.
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The movie "Pearl Harbor" was so cheesy it  is one of the few war movies I have seen that I have never wanted to  buy a video of.  Take some time and watch the 1968 movie "Tora Tora Tora."  You can write  an excellent review based on a comparison of the two movies.  If you  want to work in something about the Doolittle raid, a look at the 1944  movie "Thirty Seconds Over Tokyo" is worth a viewing.  I know the producers were trying to attract female fans with the love  story angle.  Unfortunately they forgot to do their homework on the  history of the raid.  I was very disappointed in this movie.
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if i was a history teacher i would give you a C  first you mixed up Teddy and Franklin  FDR said the infamy quote not teddy.   FDR did walk many times. (he needed some support though) he actually  walked up the gangplank to board the USS Houston.  And there are many simple mistakes. You need to research more and give  this to someone so they can correct it for you.  the depression really ended in the late 30s
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